Tears of Time (Poem)

A dark splash

Focus flooding

Lost the time

When is it coming

Life to oblivion

Edge to rock bottom

Mind to it lost

Lucky to 'caught him'

Unfamiliar face

A familiar smile

Eyes to my soul

Our hearts' on trial

Acceptance, please

Forgive my design

Worn and rusted

From tears of time

Author's Note

In the "Lucky to 'caught him'" part, I was selling drugs and I was lucky to have not been caught.

Reviews

[Nr. Nine]

you really know how to move other people withyour words. You're choosing your words nicely :)

Nr. Nine

[Damien Davison]

I appreciate the compliment, thank you for your support.

[Heather]

wow
full of description that brings your words to life
good job

[Damien Davison]

Thank you, I try and make these pieces visual without using words... I appreciate the reviews.

[Lushan]

You use words well. :)

[Damien Davison]

Thank you.

[Hadewijch Lady of the N..]

Breathtaking...!

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much.

[MachinaWriter]

Man, I really liked this one. Some great imagery in this piece. I think the last stanza had to have been my favorite. The whole "Acceptance, please" part really seemed to pack a punch and made the lines that followed ring clear. Good work. I'm definitely becoming a fan.

[Damien Davison]

Yea man, through addiction I designed myself basically in to an angry bitter person, but have found happiness.... To an extent. Life is still life. Thank you for taking your time to read my writings.