First stanza is talking about physically moving from earth to pavement, second stanza is describing the directions in life, and how we escape life with work, entertainment, substances...
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I like it. Very simple, yet profound. You wrapped up human experience in a few short lines which is a great accomplishment. As always, good work ^^
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot man! Long, short, whatever works I suppose...
11 Years Ago
I agree. I always have some ridiculously long story to try and explain things lol Wish I could write.. read moreI agree. I always have some ridiculously long story to try and explain things lol Wish I could write something this concise. That's skill. On a side note, think you could check out my poem Spanish Lullaby? I think you'll like that one.
Thanks, man, that means a lot. Some ppl, comments are alright, but when I respect the person as a po.. read moreThanks, man, that means a lot. Some ppl, comments are alright, but when I respect the person as a poet, the comment means even more. I respect you as a poet.
11 Years Ago
Back to you my friend, thanks a lot! I'll try and find some more time for this site too