Escaping Life (Poem)

Escaping Life (Poem)

A Poem by Damien Davison
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Just a poem I wrote about life.

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As we walk through life
Beneath our feet
Forests change to city streets

Roads to trails then paths we tread
Escaping life to wind up dead

© 2012 Damien Davison


Author's Note

Damien Davison
First stanza is talking about physically moving from earth to pavement, second stanza is describing the directions in life, and how we escape life with work, entertainment, substances...

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I like the poem.. I can agree with the first stanza by alot:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing!
constancelovesdarkness

11 Years Ago

Your welcome and thank you for reviewing mine too:)
I enjoyed this. Short, yet emotive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
excellent, brief poetic description of life's journey. well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I like it. Very simple, yet profound. You wrapped up human experience in a few short lines which is a great accomplishment. As always, good work ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Wow, that was a very nice piece man, seriously!
MachinaWriter

11 Years Ago

Thanks, man, that means a lot. Some ppl, comments are alright, but when I respect the person as a po.. read more
Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Back to you my friend, thanks a lot! I'll try and find some more time for this site too

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Added on November 16, 2012
Last Updated on November 16, 2012
Tags: Escaping, Life, Damien, Davison, MedD, Poem, Poetry