Tearless Rain

It's been a rainy day.

Dark skies,

Puffy clouds,

Cold breeze

Fills the air

Looking out

Faces appear

Rain falls

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Slowly,

Quietly,

What looks to be

These faces crying

Sends chills

Shivering down my spine

 

 

Author's Note

Decided not to give up on writing. Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

I'm so glad you decided not to give up on writing!! I struggled with the same thoughts many of times, and one time, I did give up, but I came back because I was miserable. Writing stories has always and will always be not only a way to relieve stress for a little bit, but also my passion. Long story short, You're a great writer!! don't give up on something you love to do because you are born with a natural gift!!
Oh, about the peom, it was great, as usual lol. Very nice imagery! GREAT job!

[Tasha]

Thank you, I gave up for two months and I too was miserable. Thanks for the review.

[Krystal Nicole]

youre welcome

[Tasha]

Thanks again.

[Star]

I love this. The faces crying part...I imagine it is the clouds , how they can make themselves look like anything

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Crying and rain- a nice combination. I really enjoyed reading this. It had that 'raining effect' you know to it, the darkness and all. Great poem:-):-):-D.

[Tasha]

OuY HanT

[Lexi]

this is really good, I love how you combined crying and raining.

[Tasha]

thank you very much.

[N!LoC]

what? did u want to give up on writing???

[Tasha]

i'm still trying to decide...i think so. I'm not as good as I use to be

[Writer #00]

The shape you gave this poem is reminiscent of a falling water droplet which accents the surface point of the poem. It's nice to write about the simplicity of nature once in a while and how it is interwoven in our lives... at least I think that's what you were doing with this piece. Anyhow, wonderful composition.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

[Nithin Purple]

wow nice poem:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;

[Tasha]

Thank you.