Little Things

What happened to me

Things are changing,

Its the little things

That makes us who we are

But its not

What makes me

I don't understand

The little things

That are becomming of me

Author's Note

It's been a while Writers Cafe, buth I think I've found my niche again. Anyway hope you like this.

Reviews

[Elizabeth Laughlin]

Short, but to the point. I have some good news for you...you completed your mission as a poet. Poetry means expressing yourself and somehow touching the reader. Well, your words make a lot of sense to me, and I can easily relate :) I wish this was longer, but maybe the length makes it unique. Maybe it's theme; I'm not really sure. I know what it feels like to be frustrated with myself and wish that the decisions I made every day didn't define me as person. What makes us the people we are? Some may say our decisions; some may say it is who we are within. However, my argument is that our actions represent who we are within...these how many lines you composed could create so much debate. I love it!!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

We will change daily. Life teaches us something each day. We need to hold on to the good things. Negative and naysayers will tried to slow us down. Thank you for the the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tasha]

Thank you for the review Coyote, I really appreciate it. Your reviews make me smile.

[Krystal Nicole]

I really liked it. It was short, but very good. Sometimes the fewer words you use, the more the impact. Very good!!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much!