i think you used distance in the right proportions, some repetition is good to get your emphasis across to the reader, you didn't overdo it. one thing i know though, if someone is going to cheat on you, distance does make it easier but, they are a cheater in their heart, so...they would have cheated anyway. this is a terrific write.
I do not think that you over used distance. i liked this. cheaters are always going to cheat and they are not worth your time. some people just don't know how to be faithful to one person and one person only.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
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I dont think 'distance' is overused. You've got it all right, its great.
I guess being in a long distance relationship does make cheating a lot easier but thats where you have to have gained there trust, and once they break your trust, dont let them back cause they'll do it again.
i think you used distance in the right proportions, some repetition is good to get your emphasis across to the reader, you didn't overdo it. one thing i know though, if someone is going to cheat on you, distance does make it easier but, they are a cheater in their heart, so...they would have cheated anyway. this is a terrific write.
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