The Edge

I'm on the edge

with you

hanging on by a thread

trying to keep what we had..

I'm slipping..

catch me..

hold me..

I don't want to loose you

we're about to fall

I hate being on the edge

with you

because you let us fall apart

Author's Note

I hope you like it.

Reviews

[kymee]

nice poem. I've been on the edge too and that is quite uncomfortable.Did you both let it fall apart?you were doing all the work in the beginning of the poem. your choice was to get out or get off instead you both let it go. Could be expanded a bit, but necessary, thanks for letting me read your poem and stay off that edge

[Cherrie Palmer]

I like that she already knows the ending but hopes for the best any how

[Keevan]

Short and sweet. Simple. Beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing.

[BrynnaW.]

Aww sounds like a break up... Good job! You are amazing at poems! Keep on writing!

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such apowerful emotional write, nicely done!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Simple and wonderful. I felt the tearing of emotions.
Great job~

Great one. It has the feeling exactly. Feels just like the edge.

[lifesmith]

i did like it :)
nice, simple, short and sweet. couldn't have been done better

[Lane-roe]

Simple, but honest. The imagery of a cliff sets the idea of this poem up really well. Good work :)

[Groovy]

Superb penning