Watching Her

Watching Her

A Poem by Tasha
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She should have turned away

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She feels your presence on her
She slowly turns to find you
Watching her...
She quickly turns away,
Back to the party
But ponders the thought
Of why you're watching her
Its because of her smile
The way she carry's herself
You'd love to find someone like her,
Which is why your watching her..
To find out what she's like
Her favorite things...
Watching her
So you know when to make a move
When she's all alone
To go for the kill
Because girls like her
Are so easy to manipulate,
To make her think he wants her,
But he just wants her blood
To use as a shield 
Against all odds 
Because the princess's blood
Is what he needs...
To break the curse 

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Different ending than I expected.
7/16/2011

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very good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review
Krystal Nicole

8 Years Ago

your welcome!!!:)
 Tasha

8 Years Ago

:)
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a stranger compilation than I've ever come across, but some how it works well together with the feel of the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Tasha

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
Dark, mysterious! Good ending. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job, nice ending. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh i enjoyed this oneeeee, good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write... love the ending.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like beauty and the beast, strong write and really interesting it held my attention from the first line. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was a love poem but it turned out to be a poetic horror flick, like the twist.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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That's how many guys are; not killers, but always looking at girl so wonderfully but with one real purpose in mind; to ruin her life or break her heart. Interesting read, nice ending.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one. It's interesting

Posted 10 Years Ago


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