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No Longer The Same

No Longer The Same

A Poem by Tasha
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7/18/11

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"What's gotten into you?"

You're no longer the 

Same girl you use to be,

You now hold your head up high

And you speak your mind,

Why are you no longer the same?

I like the old you

That did stuff to satisfy everyone else's needs

You did it without question, 

I don't like the new you,

Because you're no longer the same

And I can't control everything you do...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Inspired by the book My Life As A Doormat in the perspective of the boyfriend who doesn't like the changes his girlfriend endures. Honest reviews.

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Good form, structure and well written, but it seemed to lack the 'umph' some of your other work does. That indefinable something that set's your work apart from the norm. If I could put my finger on what it was I would tell you, but you definatley have it

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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nice once again

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

9 Years Ago

Thanks
This is wonderful. I would add punctuation to make the flow clearer, but it is a great piece. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this, I related to this even though I am much older than you. I have set up new boundaries and it has been a struggle for some people.
Tx S.Hunt

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why......... WHY...!? This is just like the thing with Ashley! Wtf!? Wow... Um.. GOod write, I'm too mad to review clearly :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this reminded me of a person that had lost someone they known but also it shows a bit of being controlling. This is still a good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great piece a battle within thats not ready for change to be humble or take stand.
Excellent write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ta'Sha you're 'growing' and that's good

Chris

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. it's short but cachy. I liked it. well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good write, it short, simple and the point is made. I love it how the girl is not a doormat, realizes it and won't be a doormat anymore and the bf doesn't like it, very common, happens all the time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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