Toxic Love

Toxic Love

A Poem by Tasha
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School time 8th grade word of the day: toxic.

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It started with you holding my hand,
Then kissing and touching
Then the real you came out,
The yelling, the screaming
Whatever happened  to love?
Whatever happened  to forever and always?
Toxic, toxic is what you are,
Toxic poison is what you caused in this relationship
Deathly stares,
Deathly threats,
Its time to leave
And find a new medicine
One that doesn't stab at my heart 

© 2011 Tasha


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Toxic is a great word for it. If the relationship you are in doesn't make you feel better about yourself and make you a better person because of it, causing instead, the upset and pain of feeling worse, it is definitely time to move on. Many will relate to this.
Well said!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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DRD
beautifully composed and a truth that happens more often than not in this world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you
deep write here, enjoyed the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is one of the only things that i have read thats actually really touched me. Those four lines were exactly what i was thinking a month ago... just makes me think about what had happened... (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very strong and powerful poem, the ending says it all!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful :) Every word, every stanza. Just beautiful :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Deathly stares" I like those words. They are scary, but I guess the real person is a combination of everything. Not just a few fights or disagreements.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great job, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abuse and belittlement are always good reasons to move on.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is very true for many relationships. you've done a good job putting it out in the open.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooh. I love 'toxic'. Perfect

Posted 8 Years Ago


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