My Teddy Bear

My Teddy Bear

A Poem by Tasha
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For Bedtime stories describing your teddy bear.

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A bear so special, so sweet,
A bear my grandmother gave to me
She gave it to me when I was born
Because without my dad my heart was torn
I always held my teddy bear tight
It gave me assurance that everything would be alright,
My teddy bear so sweet and nice
I never had to think twice,
That teddy bear was used for the best
Now it has been put to rest
With my grandmother,
So goodbye my wonderful people
In my heart you both remain equal

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
The bear my grandmother gave me was pink and it is now in her casket.

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such a beautiful picture and memory.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Such sadness from such beautiful memories, the image of laying to rest the two most close to you is heart breaking. You approach this as always with an open heart, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminded my of my own teddy....um (teddy rabbit?) XD. lol anyway, i loved this poem. Beautiful from beginning to end

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a pretty poem and its sweet. The poem is everything your bear was. The color of the text is still my complaint. You have a picture of a pink bear so the color is not necessary.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was a touching poem i really enjoyed it! great job everybody has msome thing special to them and you gave yours to someone you loved, inspiring

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice. my mother has her teddy bear from when she was a kid. very sweet


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the smallest things can hold our greatest memories. I have a small bunny that i have had since the day i was born, and i dont intend to give it up. this is a sweet poem and its really nice what you did with your bear and your grandmother.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet memories of a treasured bear. A beautiful momento and treasured gift to leave with your grandmother. Peace be with you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great write. I lost a teddy bear that my parents gave me and I thought about that when I read this. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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