Light Shines Through

Light Shines Through

A Poem by Tasha
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I think everyone has good in them.

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Everyone has good in them,
But its up to them to find it
Within themselves
No matter who you are
Or where you come from,
Light shines through
Even in darkness
When everyone else sees 
The beast in you,
There's a speck of light
Desperately trying to be seen
So everyone can see you for
Who you are
So everyone can see the real you
When light shines through

© 2011 Tasha


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Some people are afraid to show kindness and be brave and to test life. Heart brake and pain can block the doors to life and love. I like the desire in this poem. Your words are true. Most people have kindness and love to share. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Really dark yet shining and love the use of the colors again!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"There's a speck of light desperately trying to be seen so everyone can see you for who you are. So everyone can see the real you when light shines through." LOVED these lines! :D Your wording was perfect, and the end was hopeful. I loved this poem! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Done well Ta'Shandra, very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What i like of this poem isn't the coloring, neither the rhyme or the crime in it, but the message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a thought provoking piece. I like the hopeful edge to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true in many ways. I agree completely, 100%, with this poem. Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a brilliant touch with the color scheme. It gives this a power that I can feel from head to toe.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great poem full of meaning. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent write! So much truth!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this T~ :) x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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