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I Love You Like A Love Song

I Love You Like A Love Song

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by the Love You Like A Love Song by Selena Gomez.

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I love you like love song baby
I love you like a song on replay,
Our love is only temporary
Because you ended the song,
I remember when we use to walk hand in hand
When you use to hold me tight
And told me everything would be alright,
I remember when you made me feel special
Like the luckiest girl on earth
I love you like a love song baby
I love you like a song stuck on replay,
The lyrics to our song I'll never forget
I'm sure one day you will  regret
Ever ending our  love song
But until you realize it
You'll forever be my favorite love song...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I was listening to Selena Gomez while I was writing this. I hope you like it.

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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Novel approach.... I enjoyed this....


Peace & Inspiration

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

music can be so moving and inspirational, this was nicely done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ta'Sha,

Makes good sense and has a style...

Chris

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww this is soooo sweet! I'm not a fan of the song (its not my thing lol) but this poem was very sweet. An enjoyable read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

After reading the first two lines, I knew I was going to like this, and I did. I loved this actually. The memories of a lover can never be forgotten. And one day, everyone will realize that they regret something that they missed out on with another. I really like how you combined love with music, they make a great combo.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay, I can't even finish reading the poem I was so distracted by "I love you like love song baby." It is grammatically incorrect.
"I love you like (a) love song baby."

I'll read it again if you edit it and send it to me in a read request again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well done. I find it fun to write poems according to songs I have been listening to at the time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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