I Love You Like A Love Song

I Love You Like A Love Song

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by the Love You Like A Love Song by Selena Gomez.

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I love you like love song baby
I love you like a song on replay,
Our love is only temporary
Because you ended the song,
I remember when we use to walk hand in hand
When you use to hold me tight
And told me everything would be alright,
I remember when you made me feel special
Like the luckiest girl on earth
I love you like a love song baby
I love you like a song stuck on replay,
The lyrics to our song I'll never forget
I'm sure one day you will  regret
Ever ending our  love song
But until you realize it
You'll forever be my favorite love song...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I was listening to Selena Gomez while I was writing this. I hope you like it.

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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I suppose we can compare a love story to a love song in real life. But when the singing stops, so does the relationship.
Great thoughts here.
Thanks for share
Babs x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This could be lyrics to a song! Has a very lyrical rhthym to it...very sweet, thoughtful, and dreamily sad. Nice one...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a heartfelt write here. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this! Heartfelt and sweet, touch of sadness and overall lovely. Perfect in my romantic view. ;D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is amzing love tht song and it does kind of get in m head when i read the tittle the song stuck to my head but amzing poem !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when I saw the word "replay" it reminded me of Iyaz' song, but your poem is great,it is simple. You write in a simple language but the emotions can still be felt, it's like well aligned thoughts.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not a fan of Ms. Gomez but a great way to capture her words and put them into perspective. A personal symbolic value id imagine. Well played :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfect inspiration for this piece it seems. This is a beautiful tribute to the love lost.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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