I Love You Like A Love Song

I Love You Like A Love Song

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by the Love You Like A Love Song by Selena Gomez.

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I love you like love song baby
I love you like a song on replay,
Our love is only temporary
Because you ended the song,
I remember when we use to walk hand in hand
When you use to hold me tight
And told me everything would be alright,
I remember when you made me feel special
Like the luckiest girl on earth
I love you like a love song baby
I love you like a song stuck on replay,
The lyrics to our song I'll never forget
I'm sure one day you will  regret
Ever ending our  love song
But until you realize it
You'll forever be my favorite love song...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I was listening to Selena Gomez while I was writing this. I hope you like it.

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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Your poem is really good!
I

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was quite an amazing poem. I loved the comparison you used. It flowed so well and was it was just beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet, a beautiful poem. Great flow, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes love allows us to magnify those feelings we have x10 ..and it all feels good.. I really enjoyed reading this :) xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love Selina's song and i loved your poem
and i realized that many people were inspires by this song it is great :)
loved your poem as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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