I Think You're The One

A good note turned sour.

I think you're the one for me

Because you're unlike all the others,

You treat me like a star

I'm getting the royal treatment,

I think you're the one for me 

Because you make me feel special,

You make me feel beautiful

And worth something

You are the one for me

Because of your boyish charm

And adorable smile,

You had me wrapped around your finger!

I thought you were the one for me

But you led a double life,

You made me believe that who you said you were

As the real you.. But it wasn't,

You're just a crook in disguise

Trying to steal someone else's joy

I thought you were the one for me

But you turned out to be

Just like all the others 

Reviews

[Brad Nugent]

Unfortunately it does take time until we find the right relationship - that perfect fit. Some start well in our own minds, but end badly as you describe. Some never get off the ground because they are clearly not right! I hate admitting that I am a romantic optimist at heart - but I do believe that happiness and love are out there - sometimes in the least expected places. A nice write about love and the betrayal of love that hurts so much when it hits us. Well done.

[blakjassy]

Good story... but trust me, they are not all like that!! lol

[Linear]

So many are the fruits that grow in the orchards of your life, and you will taste many bitter fruits till the sweetest one is in your hand. :0)

[Coyote Poetry]

We can be trick by people with a good front and sweet words. I like how you open the poem. A very sad ending. In the end the truth will come out. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

Enjoyable read! I liked it. And yes sadly thus this does happen in life... nice twist of the ending. I actually thought it would be a happy ending but ended up melancholy. I like your descriptions. ^o^ Well done! Great write!

[Short.Nerd]

An amazing write! Sadly this does happen in life. Keep up the great work!