It's You

It's You

A Poem by Tasha
"

My first attempt at a song.

"
You hold me tight 
And say everything will be alright
You give me hope
To help me cope
You are so special
To me
And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You fill me up with glee
You make me proud
To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you,
It's you,
And all the things you do
To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You feel me up with glee
I can't deny
You're such a nice guy

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

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Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really did like it ...... nice lyrics....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the song. Good movement and positive words. Thank you for the outstanding poem/song.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work on your first song. Each one will get better and easier. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I noticed that you write a lot of things dealing with love.... Its emotional, but it feels forced or fake. It doesn't seem real. I'd like to see a composition of music and hear someone sing it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The emotion is full and strong, and the rhymes makes the whole song more musical. You're a reallly talented song writer. If there's more passion in the whole song, it'll be perfect!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your song is structured so well! I like the flow of it, and the pure emotions that flow with it! You can be a lyricist with no problem! Kudos to you! You capture the feelings in this song quite well.

I give this piece a 100!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all gotta start somewhere... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw:) I think that was really good:) I'm terrible at even attempting to write a song so I can't really judge this at all:) I wish I could hear the song:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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