A Poem by Daniel Gardner

First poem from a long writing break.

My senses have become dole
All from the fragileness of my sole
Peace is what everyone strives for
But Peace is not in me
It is a fictitious 
Malicious disease
All caused by the minds dreams
In this time
In this world 
We will not see peace
Never until mans egos Cease
I will all ways bleed in tears
This is what peace is I fear
A struggle through out your life
To fall and have to rise
Only to knocked back in to the grass
Peace will never come to pass
Not until my life ends in this life

© 2012 Daniel Gardner

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"We will not see peace
Never until mans egos Cease"
The above words are true. If everybody want to win. In the end. No-one will win. The poem told a honest view of life and living. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry. I'm glad to be able to read your words again.

Posted 7 Years Ago

A very well written poem overall. Only personal comments: The rhyme scheme seems a little generic. But otherwise very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 8, 2012
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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA

I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..