Super Indeed

Super Indeed

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Mind races a lot and this is what cam out.

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In the depths there are no breaths
In the deep you can not weep
In time you will shine
From the wine you will be divine
With a cape you will not escape
With a blow you will over throw
From their blood you will judge
In the end you will be supreme
With your sword you will win
From the fog you will emerge
In one day you will conquer the world
In your mind you have an immaculate soul
One day at a time you will climb
Your past will not last
Live each day like your last
Super Indeed is your self esteem.

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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very nice job as usual i like the style you use here its really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was cute, I really liked it :) Just watch out here though, "In you mind " should be "In your mind". Only issue I found :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


A creative and cool write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked this poem It was really good. I liked the emotions. Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like the last line, another great write! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Poem is powerful and the last line is a true statement. Life is hard and we must be strong to struggle and win a few battle in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting i always live life as it was my last to the fullest i have a love for life

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is fantastic. I really can't say more, it's truly incredible. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A poem of strength and determination, the love and moral support for another. I have a feeling I know who this poem was written for, which makes my heart sing.
The only thing I noticed were a few spelling errors.
Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Philosophically beautiful….
Beauty of wisdom….
Beauty of rhythm…
Beauty of truths…..
Altogether…nice reading


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..

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