I can't explain

I can't explain

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Random thoughts written out.

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I...I can't explain
Why there are the lame
Why tumors develope on the brain
Why the sky is never plain

I...I can't explain
Why quantum physics are not possible
Why a tree can become hollow
Why the stars are so far away

I...I can't explain
Why cancer is so deadly
Why my head is full of fantasy
Why time never stops
Why innocent men run from the cops

I...I can't explain
Why love is so strange
Why sex cures distress
Why a wife can get so depressed

I...I can't explain
Why I love you
Why I feel this way
Why I can't relate

I...I can't explain
Why this poem is written this way
Why I will post this anyway.

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Daniel Gardner
Random thought but still rate,review,comment.

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I love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very good poem very good style and word choice. the stanza break down was nice as well it made it flow easily good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Gotta be my favorite from you today, the ending was perfect. Great work~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice pen on this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good write. I really liked it. I mean the feeling in this piece is really emotional. I can feel every emotion in this piece. I really like it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


At first when I was starting out with the poem, I thought it was all disheveled, but as I read the rest of it, the randomness started working out. I believe all these questions run through our minds every now and then, but there really is no one who could answer each mind blowing question we have. It would be a miracle if anyone could. This poem was really serious and started relaxing a bit more as it ends.

Posted 12 Years Ago


If you could answer all the question in the poem. You would be a saint for this world. I like the complete poem. Everyday I learn to do what my grandfather taught me years ago. Say nothing unless it is good or worthwhile. Better to be quiet then a fool or a man in the dog house. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


i cant explin some things either but this is a good poem nice write But cancer and aids them cells are inside us its just a matter of not let that creat within us its like a bomb exploding life can be so short lived so you never know when it ends enjoy it with the ones who care the most and Enjoy the beauty god gives us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i cant explain it either. but its a good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome write. The last 3 stanzas were the strongest for me and really bought out the emotion. The ending i like and is what i can relate to. Great job Daniel

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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