Silence

Silence

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
"

Emotional all over again....

"















We walk by and breaths is all I hear
My lips quiver
Just to call you near
So silent we have be come
Not realizing the setting sun
Our love has run dry
No more will we be alive
Limbo is no more I fear
Now we turn a deaf ear
Like a mime trapped in a box
Silent motions convey our thoughts
For in the end
The silence will infect our hearts

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
......
Review,Rate,Comment

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Excellent poem! i loved this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


good, powerful emotion. nice job. i really do love the way your show your emotion through your poetry its very thought provoking and makes it interesting to read. good depth to it as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


again, i love this! very good...i like the "like a mime trapped in a box, silent motions convey our thoughts."

Posted 9 Years Ago


very sad, made me cry abit but very lovely poem. nice work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sad, but, I think, sometimes very true... though silence does not have to be a bad thing. I like the subtle rhyming, it's not a very obvious pattern but somehow there is rhyming, and it makes it more fluent :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really good, loved it. good job =D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awl...very sad. Sometimes the distance just kind of sneaks up on us. That is when a couple says how did we get to this place. I like the reference to a mime trapped in a box. Kudos.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked this. Very good though.
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


I don't know. I like the silence and quiet time my self. I like the feel in the poem. A intense feel of raw emotion waiting for something to happen. A very well written poem with a very strong story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good…..
But…..seems like an incomplete poem….
After reading it…..a feeling of incompleteness ….remains…
I don’t know why…

Posted 9 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

729 Views
24 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on May 2, 2010
Last Updated on May 2, 2010

Author

Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



About
I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Rage Rage

A Poem by Daniel Gardner