Where did we go?

Where did we go?

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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For you

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You say I need a break
But you won't let me sleep
You say you want me
But leave me to beg and plead
I helped bring you out of the dark and into the light
Now that you see me you seem to run from fright
I can't understand the distance
That makes me feel you want to end this
I expected the pain and sorrow
I did not expect our love to be hollow
There's nothing more I can do
But sit wallowing in my grief

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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When something starts it has to come to a end like watching a movie it has a start and a end. But a friendship is suppose to last forever. But not all go quite so perfect and in those situations its best to end it

Posted 10 Years Ago


I've been there before. :/

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This expresses very well, when the "point of defeat" kicks in, at a relationship's end. Loved the last two lines, especially, the next to the last. Very concise, well written, and expressive!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing poem and sad as well. Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautifully sad. Such emotion in this poem. You did fantastic job expressing the feelings here. Great job! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome poem you got here! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I actually got this, shocker, and I must say that this is an awesome piece of your mind. I like it :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so powerful hon
Sometimes it seems there is no way forward!
An intense poem
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very honest...and genuine....sometimes in love you can not understand what you really do want...when you come too close you feel if you don't maintain enough distance you may just lose yourself and never find yourself again....all is so confusing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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