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A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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I'm Back! Did you miss me?

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I have left more then once.
My shell I have changed.
Broken I arrived,
Renewed I was born a new.

Things never change,
People rarely do.
I have written.
I have wrote.

I live a life of change.
I try never to remain the same.
Butterflies change then die.
I change only to rise
Stronger.

I fly ever higher.
Even when the devil shines,
His fake sunlight in my eyes.

I am here to stay this time.
My poems will only grow great.
Always remember my motto
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© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Daniel Gardner
Thanks For reading. This is my introduction to me coming back to Writers Cafe. Comment, Review, Rate. Love you all.

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This was a good poem. I really loved it. I think you did a wonderful job on coming back to WritersCafe. Don't ever leave this site because you are really good at what you do. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ooh, clever! I didn't expect that at the end. I like this because it catches my attention. It also could have been seeing Bender at the top, but still a nice piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well expressed thoughts…
Exuding confidence…
It fills the reader’s mind too…
With confidence and enthusiasm…
Thanks for sharing daniel….


Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this poem :D I should make a poem about my motto,err..:/ Haha, I think I have ADHD. I'm also loving the picture, I busted out laughing when I saw it, and immediatley knew this poem was gonna be AMAZING. That made you feel good huh? No? Aw well, haha :p

Posted 10 Years Ago


love it nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very good poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good write. Welcome back. I know the feeling, not being on nearly as much as I had been. Eager to read and review!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nice I like how this is spiritaul and homorous all at the same time, the last lines made the cake! Good job bud:D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha well welcome back. I love the last lines, very cute. Now that you're back, can we expect at least a poem a day? :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes your words are true. We learn and grow in life experience with each day of life. I like the strong ending. A positive and powerful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

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