A Poem by Daniel Gardner



What is this i feel deep in my chest?

This is something that won't let me rest!
I toss and turn,
Turn and toss!
I need to figure this out.
This need.
This want.
This hungering desire.
This passion of unfilled lust!
What is it.
What could it be.
Oh wait there it is.
The last sip of my thirtieth beer.

© 2010 Daniel Gardner

Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
LOL no I'm not a drunk. Just wrote the first thing that came to mind since my wife is bugging me to write.
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This was a good poem. I love the picture that goes with it. I love Family Guy. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hahaha. My boyfriend's dad would love this. -saves to favorites-

Posted 10 Years Ago

LOL. very witty and Made me giggle love it lol. Nice work God bless

Posted 10 Years Ago

Simple….humble..and… beautiful…

Posted 10 Years Ago

The author's note made me laugh, cuz I thought dang I didn't think he drank. :p Yeah, I know imma dork, but I review your poems so you need me :D Haha by the way, awesome poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Sound like a drunk poem. Very funny.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This can be take two different ways. One as a light hearted poem joking around or as a more serious topic about alcoholism. Either way this poem tells a story and it is a great story from both perspectives. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Good one. Had me guessing to the end. Why the thirteenth beer? Significance in the number? LOL

Posted 10 Years Ago

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That was great! I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't humor. It was really nice and fresh. Very funny, nicely done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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This was funny, glad to hear you dont drink, neither do I. I really liked the part. What is this i feel deep in my chest?
This is something that wont let me rest.
I toss and turn,
turn and toss.
Good job, been there before well without the beers..lol Good right:D Hope the family is doing good, PEACE:D

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA

I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..


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