Part 10: Snap

This is getting interesting

Oh god no
I prayed for divine intervention
Even though I have no godly conviction

The sirens Blair
Screeching through the midnight air
Fear is my enemy at this point

I fantasies
What will I find
In the place that I call mine

The hunt is bringing me home
That maniac called from my phone

We arrive and circle my house
I ran in tripping over my favorite couch
"Laura I yelled"

Only Silence pierces my ears
Then the sound of a woman's moan
Travels down the dark stairs

I dash leaving my heart behind
Only to find my wife in mid grind
Releasing her sexual delights

I scream bloody hell
I toss her off to the floor
"No More!"

Icy fear again fills my vans
The Man was bare
His face full of despair

He was dead in erect form
I look to my wife
Sill imitation the act

Her moans were not of pleasure
Her tears not of joy
Her body now in convolutions

Her body leaks
Filling our noses with a fowl stink
"Medic!" I yell

Her body goes numb
Eyes a hollow shell
No longer in despair

My wits escape me
I run into the bathroom
Puke hits the floor

I look to the sink to see a note
That b*****d had wrote
Rage is no longer the word for me

"P.S.
Thanks for the talk
Thanks for the fun"

"P.P.S
You liar!
I knew you like that butter pecan taste---->"

I follow the arrow to the top of the toilet
To Find blue ecstasy pills
And the empty container of my dairy Treat.

Author's Note

Not the best chapter but hey always room to rewrite. Just wanted to get my thoughts out. Comment, Review, Rate.

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow..
A breath taking narration….
It is very touching…
A very nice poem…
You write directly from your life…
And your style has a special beauty

[Ruth]

Daniel, there is something so intense in this part!
I think these are awesome love:) Vividly unsettling actually lmao
Cool write hon!
xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting story. I like the pace and the strange ending. Your mind is always working.
Coyote

[Senseless whatever]

Excellent write. Fast paced and kept me to the end. The story as a whole is fascinating. keep giving just enough to tease not enough to be predictable, except for that taste! great job.

[Brianna Brie]

I dash leaving my heart behind
Only to find my wife in mid grind

Very good rhyme and rhythm. Oooh...you bring alive the mess of it all!

[HorrorMaster]

I like it though. Very good