Part 11: A time to die

This is the final chapter in Legacy!!

It's been three years today
Since that sick b*****d took my life away
He clams it was to open my eyes
To see that everyone can be lead astray
no matter what level of faith

I knew she was cheating
I was going to confront her that day
Not to chastise her on the case
But to see what developed this stale taste

I didn't get that chance
Now its time for my last stance
I got his anniversary letter today
The same on each year
This year their were no tears

I have since quit my job
Stopped caring for the souls of man
My thoughts remained poisoned
I waited till now

I have no back up and no gun
Only the fire in my lungs
No heart in my chest
Only darkness in my mind

I open the door to his apartment
Caution is no longer my department
I see him in the kitchen
Smiling at me from a distance

I growl with the rage and give chase
Angered by the crazed look on his face
I reach with a demonic sensation
I feel his throat in my hand

Now is my chance
It is time to execute my master plan
I crush his wind pipe with out a struggle
He just kept smiling

He collapsed to the floor
But Still I want more
I take his knife and slice
And I dice

Butter
Oh So Smooth
No more do i Have stress
This feeling is the best

Now I am hungry
I look only to find
Butter pecan Ice scream
And a note saying take

I talk a bite and melt away
today is a new day
A great day
For this is the start
Of a new Legacy

Author's Note

Has you look back on this poem and series think chain letter. Just with humans. I know this is a bit complex but hey that is how the story goes in my head. Hope you all enjoyed it. Comment, Review, Rate

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good. I loved this one. It was excellent. The whole book was really good. Thanks for sharing. :)

[JENY]

My god…
Dear Daniel….
You should never cherish such sadistic thoughts..
It will generate negative energy in you….
Though I enjoyed reading…
I hate choosing such themes for my writing…
But …I will not say… you should not chose…
But…but…but…
The actual thing is..
I am afraid…

[Ruth]

Interesting the first stanza - you have turned the poems around to a new level, thats great :) That there is a lesson, according to the murderer gives more impact!
Excellent!
xx

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this chapter. Very strong and filled with powerful story and a lot of action. I like the language in the story. A very good chapter. Thank you.
Coyote

[Senseless whatever]

Loved the story as a whole. Would have liked a little more struggle at the end but hey this works. So now our hero has become the villain and the cycle of butter pecan can continue. Once again great story Thanks for sharing!

[HorrorMaster]

This one i think is the best. 100/100

[kuru]

this reminds me of batman's moral dilemma in the dark knight...how he had to restrain himself from killing the joker and that was his flaw and his strength..here you gave the detective a flaw but at the end of the day he was still human and gave into the desire to kill and seek revenge and became what he hated... hatred breeds hatred....

nice ending... overall...but i think it seems a bit rushed you should have continued the chase for a bit more chapters in my opinion...