The Meladoy

The Meladoy

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Something Knew I wanted to try at work. Written in song form.

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Verse 1

This is a song
Made to increase your dreams
Fulfill fantasies
Bringing only pure ecstasy
This breath taking smooth delight
Is to help you fight

Chorus X2

This is what no one else can do
This song is meant for you
This melody is for me
This is to do what we do
Fight!

Verse 2

You really think this is interesting
But Your friends think we are absurd
Although there is no denying
That the sonic boom of our hearts can be heard

Chorus X2

This is what no one else can do
This song is meant for you
This melody is for me
This is to do what we do
Fight!

Verse 3

Believe me when I say
Our love is a strange thing
Full of pain
And melodic door bell rings
But I wouldn't change it for anything

Chorus x3

This is what no one else can do
This song is meant for you
This melody is from me to you
This is to do what we do
Fight for love!

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
Be nice this is my first time attempting lyrics. Just thought of it at work and wrote it out. Comment, Review, Rate.

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This was very nicely written. I liked the flow of the song. It was very great. I could hear music in the background as I read this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


That’s a good song …..
I can hear it ringing in my ears...
Loved it…..


Posted 10 Years Ago


I struggle with lyrics. I believe you did very well. I like the flow and the story in the words. We must fight for love or lose it. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the message within this song love, you should post it as a song lol Be great to hear :)
I get the feeling of serious power chords in this!
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pretty good song

Posted 10 Years Ago


I had it till 'sonic boom' The only words that threw me. Otherwise it reads very well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting and different

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 13, 2010
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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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