Testimony

Testimony

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Another attempt at a poem put into song form.

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Verse 1


Why do you love me
Say that you need me
Crave to be with me
But when you look at me
Its as if you can't see me

You look right through me
Even though you screwed me
Into the wall
Through the floor
Into my grave

Chorus X2

What should I do
Because she left me for you
And you
How can I live
When she left me for you
And you, and her too

Verse 2

It's beautiful to watch a lotus bloom
Even though its doomed
That what I see in you
Doom like the doom song
That Squirrely the Squirrel use to sing
But this squirrel doesn't want a nut from you

Chorus X2

What should I do
Because she left me for you
And you
How can I live
When she left me for you
And you, and her too

Verse 3

So do what you do what you did to me
Like Slipknot says
And don't bother to make my bed
Feel shame and let your face turn red
I'll never forgive this grave sin
It's time to shed my skin

Chorus X1

What should I do
Because She left me for you
And you
How can I live
When She left me for you
And you, and her too.

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
I hope you guys like this if not the song then my attempt. lol. Comment, review, rate.

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This was good. I really liked it...what the woman did in the poem was unforgivable.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow…
A wonderful song….
Written by a quill dipped in the ink of dilemma….


Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the flow of the words. It is music. Almost like one of those old country songs. A very good tale of loving and leaving. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sound like a beautiful song

Posted 10 Years Ago


I was just thinking, after the first stanza, 'Wow, this reads like a song'... so I guess your attempt was good!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great 'attempt' Reads well as both poem and song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmmm... ? not sure it's differnet

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it a lot hon :) Would be a good song! A heavy guitar I feel for the chorus and an acoustic twelve string for the verse lol
Great work
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 13, 2010
Last Updated on September 19, 2010

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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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