The Descent

The Descent

A Poem by dangerbooze
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Today's current emotion.

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Can I follow you?
Can I please?
Or are you another illusion
Sent to torment and tease

Please don't come closer
Let me fade away
I promise you won't miss me
I'll see you yesterday

I cherish the sorrow
I envy those screams
the sound of my heart
being torn by the seams.

© 2010 dangerbooze


Author's Note

dangerbooze
I can't think of anything else to add to it at the moment. My thoughts and feelings are a scrambled mess and this is all I could put into words.

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First let me just say wow. For something that was just created out of a scrambled mess, its really excelent. The first two lines make me think of a lost child for some reason, but thats a good thing because it brings about emotion. I love how it changes around to "Or are you another illusion" because it makes you think words like pyscho. The rest of the lines flow amazingly, I can image so many different reasons for the words with is good because it allows more people to relate better.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short yet intriguing, a good pleasure to read , though saddening.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 18, 2010
Last Updated on June 18, 2010
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I'm a lazy writer. I write what I feel when I feel like it. But to be more specific, I have a constant case of writer's block about pretty much every thought that I can think of or even consider. .. more..

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A Poem by dangerbooze