Sacredness Coated in B***h

Sacredness Coated in B***h

A Poem by dangerbooze
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The title is something my ex boyfriend came up with. And now I'm thinking he was onto something...

"
You silly
ignorant
arrogant fool
I warned you
You know it
personally
Do you not?
You remember
the rage
the utter loathing
the seething
endless
pit 
The result of Nature
is such a terrible
frightening
thing to behold
The Great Mother
taught me many things
especially
how to hide
I hide my affection
behind cruel
sinister
sneers of 
utter 
and 
complete revulsion
You remember
do you not?
When my eyes darkened
the chains of our
fragile
helpless
tender friendship
Became a noose around your neck
I forgive you
just this once
But never forget
oh you silly
pathetic
simpleton
Heaven forbid
you betray my trust
that noose 
you struggle to escape from
shall shatter
become slivers of razors
Every cut
inflicted on that
trusting
innocent
body of yours
will signify your end
Every spike
of pure agony
a reminder to you
of what it is
that I
unfortunately
personally
mourn for
The loss of a friend
too blind to see the damage 
that remains on 
a desperate soul
just wanting to be able
to trust once more.

© 2010 dangerbooze


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Your ranting poem was very to the point and powerful. Why waste time being anything less than genuine.

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOVE THIS! it's like you managed to structure the grief, anger, even though it's so sharp and ... and.... you just got it spot on, I really do love your writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Punch and roll, wow, I feel like I just sat through a prize fight. A one-sided fight. Mike tyson vs the 86 pound weakling. There is a bit of anger here, expressed quite well. Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great expression of anger released.. a suggestion would to work on reigning in the feelings and trying to say them in a direct way.. but I love what you have, no negative.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow..Such anger and pain, this is so dark and dreary.
I really like it..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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dangerbooze
dangerbooze

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I'm a lazy writer. I write what I feel when I feel like it. But to be more specific, I have a constant case of writer's block about pretty much every thought that I can think of or even consider. .. more..

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A Poem by dangerbooze