I'm OK - Broken

I'm OK - Broken

A Poem by Danique
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People use OK to hide their broken feelings. But if you do it takes longer to heal. Even worse the people you care for will see your mask as normal.

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Some people hide behind “I’m OK”

But in reality they are broken.

Because they don’t tell how they feel,

It takes for them ages to heal.

 

They hope for people to see,

Hoping others can set them free.

But not everyone can look inside,

They can’t see how many tears someone cried.

 

So how about instant of telling lies,

So show the others your cries.

Because if they care for you,

They will be there to help you through.

 

And when they do,

When it get like it used to.

And on that day,

You can finally say:

 

“I used to be Broken.

 But now I’m OK”

© 2013 Danique


Author's Note

Danique
Made this today can have some grammar errors.
You can tell them but i won't change them :3

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The way each individual heals is different... some just do not like to show feelings to others... while others show them instantly... I understand your concept here... in reality... everyone of us goes through the development...even if they just said the words out loud... the healing process is time... and the length is arduous...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2013
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Tags: Broken, Feelings, Recover

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Danique
Danique

Doetinchem, Gelderland, Netherlands



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