Stretched

Stretched

A Poem by Dani California
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Tanka

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Staring at success
I stretch as far as I can
longing to touch it
and bring it back home with me
to prove I'm more than you thought 

© 2016 Dani California


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This is such a wonderful write here, i enjoyed this

Posted 11 Months Ago


Love the words! Nice write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Brilliant message!!! Beautifully penned tanka....It is thought provoking....Well done dear frnd....Full ratings!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani California

4 Years Ago

Thank you Dhiman! :)
Inject Positivity

4 Years Ago

Awww!!! Thank you, not too many people comments with my name....This is so sweet of you.....

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Added on February 15, 2016
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