CRAYONS

 

 

 

I picked up a crayon

And scribbled a bit

This blank piece of paper

Had new purpose to it 

 

I picked up another

And scribbled some more 

Its meaning grew deeper 

So the more I explored  

 

I continued through the box

Picking one crayon at a time

Then adding more color

To this masterpiece of mine

 

A pinch of blue

A dabble of green

I litte bit of red

Every color was seen

 

Each and every color

Gently blended and entwined

Painted the color of love

On the hearts

 

Of mankind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes this is nice ,as i see it ,writing adds a color with each word you say until at the end with so many words there is a great writing imaging a very nice cored peace of imagination ,with the words or the color blending so nicely to put out a great piece as if you have just finished a painting rather than a drawing ,very nice ly done

[Jerri]

Wow...I love it! I came looking for a poem and left with a rainbow to brighten the day~

[Windy]

Very sweet poem. I like the way you added " color" one by one and made a blank piece of paper into a portrait of mankind. Good job, lovely read.

[Norma J. Jessee]

Very creative, you found a way to do what I've always wanted to do. Dabble and play with each different color. When writing a poem I find myself debating on which color to use, always limiting myself to a few normally used colors but in my heart wanting to go wild and use them everyone. I applaud you on finding this creative way to do so.

BRILLIANT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jessi]

Very beatiful I love the way you have written this it shows so much talent

[KieraCrimeScene]

i like it so much.
you get two reviews.

a job well done.
=]

[Gavin Keary]

Good way of expressing the overall emotions created by this piece.

[Becca]

A very creative, fun and easy to understand poem.
I really like this!

[Dawn]

Wow I actually loved this hun, it made me smile, and giggle. Has a really deep meaning to. Really well thought out, loved it. Dawn x

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a kind of writing which is both cute and deep because the meaning which it is conveying is really great!
Also I wonder the time you've given to it's formatting...This shows your passion and love towards writing..
Lovely write!

[robin]

In your colorful zen simplicity the colors and their words achieve a dynamic lively quality and bring your message to life! Wonderful word crafting! Great Architecture!