CRAYONS

CRAYONS

A Poem by Dani California

 

 

 

I picked up a crayon

And scribbled a bit

This blank piece of paper

Had new purpose to it 

 

I picked up another

And scribbled some more 

Its meaning grew deeper 

So the more I explored  

 

I continued through the box

Picking one crayon at a time

Then adding more color

To this masterpiece of mine

 

A pinch of blue

A dabble of green

I litte bit of red

Every color was seen

 

Each and every color

Gently blended and entwined

Painted the color of love

On the hearts

 

Of mankind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Dani California


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yes this is nice ,as i see it ,writing adds a color with each word you say until at the end with so many words there is a great writing imaging a very nice cored peace of imagination ,with the words or the color blending so nicely to put out a great piece as if you have just finished a painting rather than a drawing ,very nice ly done

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Wow...I love it! I came looking for a poem and left with a rainbow to brighten the day~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet poem. I like the way you added " color" one by one and made a blank piece of paper into a portrait of mankind. Good job, lovely read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creative, you found a way to do what I've always wanted to do. Dabble and play with each different color. When writing a poem I find myself debating on which color to use, always limiting myself to a few normally used colors but in my heart wanting to go wild and use them everyone. I applaud you on finding this creative way to do so.

BRILLIANT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beatiful I love the way you have written this it shows so much talent

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it so much.
you get two reviews.

a job well done.
=]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good way of expressing the overall emotions created by this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very creative, fun and easy to understand poem.
I really like this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow I actually loved this hun, it made me smile, and giggle. Has a really deep meaning to. Really well thought out, loved it. Dawn x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a kind of writing which is both cute and deep because the meaning which it is conveying is really great!
Also I wonder the time you've given to it's formatting...This shows your passion and love towards writing..
Lovely write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In your colorful zen simplicity the colors and their words achieve a dynamic lively quality and bring your message to life! Wonderful word crafting! Great Architecture!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 1, 2008
Last Updated on June 4, 2008

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Dani California
Dani California

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