Where Souls Touch

Where Souls Touch

A Poem by Dani California

 

A mere glimpse

Took me on a journey

Through your eyes

Whence I could see

An enchanting light

Emanating your beauty

Old fears now faded

Behind the light of courage

Old sorrow

Blissfully removed

By the light of joy

Old heartache

Cast aside

By the light of new love

Take me there

Don’t let me leave

In your heart I will lay

Please, let me stay

Forever in that place

Where truth resides

Joy is endless

Love is unmeasured

Oh how I need you

To take me there

To that wondrous place...

  

Where souls touch

 

© 2008 Dani California


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Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch

Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Truly a brillant and prophetic look into your dreams andlife dear!
You have brilliantly wrote and channeled into the greatness of the unlimted positive energy in
this universe with all your incredible writing!
You are a very talented poet who time of greatness is comming very soon!
I just feel that in my soul!
Keep writing from the depths of your soul,
for the good of all souls!
Another brillant job done with this write hun!
Always,
TIM

Posted 13 Years Ago


I was thinking one thing when I started by the end another...nice journey.

Expanding...I thought u were meeting an old friend again who had changed..in essence you were..love

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Old fears now faded
Behind the light of courage
Old sorrow
Blissfully removed
By the light of joy

A beautiful journey that you take us on with you. So amazingly visual... This poem is stunning in its beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all.

xxoxx
Goddess

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love it... a little too repetitive for me... but a fav for the parts that mattered. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everything is pure when it brings happiness from sorrow.. great write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful piece and a wonderful place. Kudos.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I love this! Where is that place? I HAVE to get there..... Like when my husband and I were first dating, our future seemed so far away....like we couldn't get there till "tomorrow"....but tomorrow seems always just out of reach.
"Old fears now faded
Behind the light of courage
Old sorrow
Blissfully removed
By the light of joy
Old heartache
Cast aside
By the light of new love"
THAT is what I'm looking for..


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was pretty...and yet enchanting. I am oh so very sorry for not doing this awhile ago.. I have been pretty bsuy. It was very good though Dani. Loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing like finding your true love to cast away the pain of old relationships. You definitely wrote words of truth that entwine the soul. Beautifully done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Take me there... Where souls touch... beautiful..

I love the powerful statements...you take the reader there truely.

For me, I almost cried.... journeys, wonderful times... etc.

I know these words can mean differently for many people but...I remember.. "Don't let me leave."

Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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