Forever

Forever

A Poem by Dani California

 

Gently

I sink into you
My once strong exterior
Now coddled like a child
Within your arms
Seemingly helpless
I am safe
 
Gradually
My heart quickens
As I feel your essence
Engulfing me
An energy like nothing else
I have ever known
Joy is home 
 
Softly
You touch my cheek
A single stroke of your hand
Sends shivers through my soul
My pulse races
As I try desperately to preserve
This moment
 
Quietly
I weep tears of joy
For the moment that I am in
And I weep tears of sorrow
For the moment that will end
I just want to lay here in your arms
Forever

© 2008 Dani California


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The essence of you shines in this, Dani! It reaches out and embraces us with tenderness and delight. I think, anyone who has experienced such moments can find the beauty in this and can relate to how fleeting such moments can be, and the desire to "stay like this forever." I certainly can relate :) Much love to you, beautiful lady.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Superb! Full of romance and emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The gently true love that is "making love" in every sense of the word is beautiful.

This loving is so different and touches every cell in the body, the heart, mind and the very soul, to the extent that when that moment ends - it is like a sort of death- and the longing to stay longer in the pefect moment is overwhelming.

Your words capture that moment perfectly.

Cheers

jen



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The complete abandon that comes from this poem is amazing.
I could feel the love and desire as I read through each line - over each word.

Excellent piece.
Well done!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is the kind of stuff i like in a writting. i could feel each word...i really enjoyed this piece. havent we all wanted to "stay" in that moment..fear of losing it! very well written. thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such tender and impassioned love
doreen

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You gave me shivers and a want to be in someones arms. Lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, D! The tenderness, the passion, the love, speak volumes in this exquisite poem ... I loved it! hugs T

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write with very genuine tones, as if I could bathe in the feeling of your writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oooooh i like it...i like it alot

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

exquisite, so enveloping and gently penned, mary

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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