Effortlessly

Effortlessly

A Poem by Dani California

 

 Effortlessly

Words flow from my fingertips,

No form or structure

To my plea,

Only emotions spilling over

In streams of ink once pure.  

 

Effortlessly

You drift through my imagery,

No lust or intent

To my thoughts,

Only curious loving prose

To you with care are sent.

 

Effortlessly

Time casts spells on loneliness,

No pain or despair

Spent while here,

Only beautifully crafted plays

For us to form and share.

 

Effortlessly

This pen moves with direction,

No dark to invite

Penned to see,

Only passionately beating hearts

Keep you in mind and plight.

 

Effortlessly, I write.

© 2008 Dani California


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really nice, my friend....sometimes that is all it takes, just to pick up a pen and there it is.

Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips,
No form or structure
To my plea,
Only emotions spilling over
For all of the world to see.

this says it all...and it is so true.

great job, Dani.

Always,

Amanda oxo



Posted 12 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful, your words touched my creative soul, effortlessly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips"
That right there shows exactly how I write. When I write, the words sealed within me open up onto this screen. Thats really what just jumped out at me in this. We all have originality, but yours is beautiful. You really know to use words to describe feelings. (or really anything just in general) SUCH a great writer. Ive been reading a lot of your work lately, and realized that you will eventually get annoyed with my continuous comments. Anyway, keep writin this stuff. Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful! wow dani this is truly amazing. The wording is fantastic and the whole things fkows great. Wow!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effortlessly
This pen moves with direction,
No dark to invite
Penned to see,
Only passionately beating hearts
Keep you in mind and plight.

My favorite stanza...You never really cease to amaze me my friend. Its always a pleasure reading your work. Too often we get caught up in trying to make the words flow, when we should just sit back and realize that our greatest works come "Effortlessly". Fantastic job

JadesSparrow

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And this is what a true writer feels. This is graceful and
elegant. AD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the flow of this -- effortlessly!

Good job with your words, images and feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really well done Dani! You are right, sometimes the words just flow from the pen, as if with a mind of its own! Kudos - an enjoyable read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These seems so effortlessly done but so well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effortlessly, I must say that this poem is an absolute majestic masterpiece, written with a true poet's hand that resonates with quality and precision.

Effortlessly, you remain the passionate, pure poetic genius that continues to inspire not only me, but all those who have the sheer privilege of reading your words.

"Effortlessly
This pen moves with direction,
No dark to invite
Penned to see,
Only passionately beating hearts
Keep you in mind and plight.

Effortlessly, I write.'

Keep on writing, effortlessly, my dear. The radiance within your words shine on the world and make it a better and happier place.

BIG hugs, girlfriend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem should be on my wall. It's nicely written and soft (if that makes any sense) I don't know it reminds me of something i would read while sitting on the beach listening to the ocean's waves crash onto the shore.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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