Quintessence

Quintessence

A Poem by Dani California

 

I want to see you,

Know you,

Gaze into your eyes,

See beyond

Your protective disguise.

 

I want to feel you,

Touch you,  

Caress your face,

Safe within

Your tender embrace.

 

I want to kiss you,

Taste you,

Trace your lips,

With gentle

Loving fingertips.

 

I want to love you,

Breathe you,

Inhale your essence,

Remaining forever

Passionate quintessence.  

 

 

© 2008 Dani California


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"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise."
Well, you certainly are not one to judge a book by it's cover! As your poems proceeds you see the beauty whithin. This is writtten with such a loving tenderness and subtlity emerging into sensuality that the flow is flawless and ultimately passionate!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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pure fun enjoyed it great work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and th first stanza was just perfect...very moving and visual...nice write..

Rach

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very Very taken in by this piece! It warms my heart! Just what I needed today..=) thanks for sharing your gifted

Much love n respect,
Anna
hugss

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very romantic piece ...

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise." --- very well written ..


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh so beautiful and seductive! Elegant, soft and romantic. I can't say enough good things about this. Excellent work :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise."
Well, you certainly are not one to judge a book by it's cover! As your poems proceeds you see the beauty whithin. This is writtten with such a loving tenderness and subtlity emerging into sensuality that the flow is flawless and ultimately passionate!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written -- While reading I thought I was in heaven. Tony

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why have I not given my kudos on this yet? Or have I and forgotten? You know us ADDers. But we are emotionally related, I can tell you that. You're just more talented than me. Write on. =0)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, you do have some very good work. Both of the entries you sent me, actually made me feel what you meant to say or do, not just read it...Amazing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How beautifully written this is. I was reading the poem thinking how lovely it would be set to music as the lyrics of a love song. I don't know if you also have musical talent, or if you know anyone you could contact for a collaborative project.

An excellent piece of work, and I feel honoured to be allowed the opportunity to read and review

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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