Where We Could Go

The night time starts to retract again,

the sunlight chases away what we had.

It falls away like a flower that’s dead,

and the light refused our dance.

 

But the rain drops feel,

and as far as we could tell,

the nights that held us have seemed to give up…

Now we could just go,

to where we’re all alone,

to our hideaway where there are only the two of us.

 

So effortlessly we went away

to where we hide.

Our selves could stay there every single day,

but it’s only a dream of mine…

 

But the rain drops feel,

and as far as we could tell,

the nights that held us have seemed to give up…

Now we could just go,

to where we’re all alone,

to our hideaway where there are only the two of us.

Author's Note

This is already a song; I've got the chords down for it. My friend and I might sing it once I see her again and she has her camera.

Reviews

[Bridgette's Ink]

Sorry i just read that you dont like read requests my bad, pay no attention to it. :)

[Bridgette's Ink]

It's beautiful, it's like an escape.

Please read my story, never lasting memories :)

[Tasha]

It was beautiful and so captivating. Amazing job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[akapr17other]

This is absolutely beautiful. I assume it's even better put to music, but it has so many wonderful images. This is a stunning piece of work. A favorite of mine. Fantastic job.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel and the desire of this poem. The words are music and I like the flow and the positive ending to the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

Well written. It's a beautiful piece. I like it a lot. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A captured and resilient piece, that grabs a reader, well done, great read.

[Aleyah]

I love this. So beautiful, and the title is capturing, as are the words. Great piece :)

[Helpless]

filled with passion for life and love, gorgeous writing for sure!

[Kayla K]

I hope you can make it into a song soon, because it would make a great one!