No Words, Plenty thoughts (Writers Block)

No Words, Plenty thoughts (Writers Block)

A Poem by Daniel Soloye
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This is extremely old found this on poetry . com in 2008 times Basically copied and pasted it

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No Vocabulary to Express Myself
Just Paper With No words
but yet my Mind's overloading with a symphony of 
1.happiness 
2. sadness 
3. pain  
4.depression 
ready to be imported into the MP3 of my sight 
allowing my vision to obtain vocals sounding like a goddess giving them abilities to sing blissful hymns through the words written
but still there's no word
This blank sheet is
begging me to douse my inked sword towards the lines on the sheet
to create a fusion called POETRY
but still No Words

No Words to relief my thoughts 
Just the utter silence 
No words Just thoughts stuck in my mind to express my inner  feeling's
Only to be heard and spoken through the whispers of the wind

© 2011 Daniel Soloye


Author's Note

Daniel Soloye
ignore grammar problems
Ermmmm wrote this late 14 early 15 found it on poetry . com
haven't really had a chance to edit it yet
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This made quite an interesting and enjoyable read. Nice work :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


yes full of many thoughts , very nice!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a great way, I hope, to relieve your writter's block. I think that if you just begin to write, the poetry or stories come to you and flow through you. Even something a simple as this can have a huge meaning or impact on someone who reads it. Im glad you posted it. But yeah, edit... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


No need to edit. Reads like what it is. a rambling thought trying to break through. I'm sure this shows an example of your growth as a writer and thinker.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOVED this, LOVED it.

"begging me to douse my inked sword towards the lines on the sheet
to create a fusion called POETRY"

AMAZING lines, LOVED it. I can relate to this too, I try to look to music to help me get it all out, perhaps strengthen the emotion so it can come out on paper.

Awesome write.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Good..!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful :)
Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2011
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