No Words, Plenty thoughts (Writers Block)

No Words, Plenty thoughts (Writers Block)

A Poem by Daniel Soloye
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This is extremely old found this on poetry . com in 2008 times Basically copied and pasted it

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No Vocabulary to Express Myself
Just Paper With No words
but yet my Mind's overloading with a symphony of 
1.happiness 
2. sadness 
3. pain  
4.depression 
ready to be imported into the MP3 of my sight 
allowing my vision to obtain vocals sounding like a goddess giving them abilities to sing blissful hymns through the words written
but still there's no word
This blank sheet is
begging me to douse my inked sword towards the lines on the sheet
to create a fusion called POETRY
but still No Words

No Words to relief my thoughts 
Just the utter silence 
No words Just thoughts stuck in my mind to express my inner  feeling's
Only to be heard and spoken through the whispers of the wind

© 2011 Daniel Soloye


Author's Note

Daniel Soloye
ignore grammar problems
Ermmmm wrote this late 14 early 15 found it on poetry . com
haven't really had a chance to edit it yet
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Yes... been there more than once myself. I think temporal brain death comes from an overdose of ‘E’ additives! Great share, which may eventual awaken some hidden memories I think I may have had or perhaps not!

Never give up – there is a great work of inspirational genius just around the metaphorical corner.
Phillip


Posted 13 Years Ago


lol Well at least YOU have thoughts. When I get it everything shuts down. Writer's catatonic block :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Basic clustering, in which you just let the feeling out and with it, some fine results, like "begging me to douse my inked sword". You unlock with this key and let the poet out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Speaking the truth !

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


ah yes, that emotional soup that mixes and mingles with each other within our stream of consciousness to produce such wonders for the heart and mind...nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Been there, done that...

Posted 13 Years Ago


(: I like

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a good write! A relateable poem for all us writers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good start, yes it could use some polish, but the feelings come through the frustraitions all of us had had at some point.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2011
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Tags: Daniel soloye, 15, fifteen year old poet, with pain comes success, penny for your thoughts, penny, for, your, thoughts


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