The New Me

The New Me

A Poem by Daniela Jamiso
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Just something I wrote a half a decade ago... when I was 10 basically.

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There's a new me this year,

A always-at-school-on-time me,

A always-have-my-homework-in-on-time me,

A clean-desk me,

A always-remember-my-equitment me,

An always-willing-to-help-out me,

A always-listen-in-class me.

The problem is

The new me

Is not like me

At all!

© 2013 Daniela Jamiso


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Daniela Jamiso
Ignore mistakes and review please :) Thanks... I know it's awful but I need feedback :)

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This is wonderful! I very much connect with it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

thanks :)
Such boldness in your honesty and such insight into yourself at such a young age. Very impressive Daniela. Keep writing, you have the talent :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

I've been told... thank you :) It means a lot :D
Wow! You have to become published, you are absolutely amazing. That? At 10 years old? Congratulations :) That is brilliant. Some people at 40 couldn't write anything as brilliant as that!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Thank you bby xxx ILY
I turned to a 10-older!
Wonderful and magical indeed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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zainul

8 Years Ago

I knew from your description that you wrote at 10 y.o.
I added you you in wattpad.
You m.. read more
Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

cool :) Thanks x
zainul

8 Years Ago

:)
I liked this..and the other me liked it too

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Ahahaha that cracked me up xx Thanks, it means a lot xx :D
Your poem describes the main challenge of becoming the embodiment of a new persona. Leaving the old you behind is where it starts and finding the right fitting new you along the way is where you finish. Very well written. Nice work. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Thank you xx
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Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

:D
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i enjoyed this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I like the ending the most ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Thank you
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

I like the twist at the end. Very good for a 10 year old and amusing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Daniela Jamiso
Daniela Jamiso

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Hey, I'm Daniela, I'm 16 and nobody cares ♡ thanks guys ♡ im obsessed with writing, tumblr, facebook, twitter and instagram.. oh and my latin and PRS homework duhhh ..... I joke a lot d.. more..

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