The New Me

The New Me

A Poem by Daniela Jamiso
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Just something I wrote a half a decade ago... when I was 10 basically.

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There's a new me this year,

A always-at-school-on-time me,

A always-have-my-homework-in-on-time me,

A clean-desk me,

A always-remember-my-equitment me,

An always-willing-to-help-out me,

A always-listen-in-class me.

The problem is

The new me

Is not like me

At all!

© 2013 Daniela Jamiso


Author's Note

Daniela Jamiso
Ignore mistakes and review please :) Thanks... I know it's awful but I need feedback :)

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It's a new type of poem I encounter here. (honestly).
It's a poem of acceptances, understanding .
I'd be the opposite, I usually change myself to fit the new me. improve.
but I guess, what I learn from your poem is that , it is also possible to stay what you are, and be who you are , to be precise.
altho , the poem brings up an important question : should we change or not?
and the poem doesn't give an answer, it gives an emotional process. the extra (!) imply the the fear of changing or the fear of the not changing perhaps , because maybe it's hard..

anyway, very impressive for a 10 year old.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

ahha lol thanks :)
Really liked this poem. I can relate to it a lot which is good.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

Thanks :P
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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

lol okay and thanks :) xoox
Chris

9 Years Ago

You were "heard" and appreciated!
Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

ahahaha lol :)
I enjoyed this poem. you chose a good subject. it has very good rhythm. you said to ignore mistakes. the only 1 I thought was the word equipment with a p.m. great job keep up the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

work equipment with pm??? huh?! And thanks it means a lot!
LOL! This has quite the comic air to it! I love it!

Best regards, Dell

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

lol, I wrote it ages ago and thanks, it means a lot
Phillitup

9 Years Ago

:)
Daniela Jamiso

9 Years Ago

(:

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Daniela Jamiso
Daniela Jamiso

London, United Kingdom



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