Some Will Learn, Some Won’t

Some Will Learn, Some Won’t

A Poem by Daniela
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How you treat others will always come back to pat you on the shoulder, and when you turn around you’ll either get punched or hugged.

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Bask in your foolishness and cruel manner
Your degradation thrown in their eyes
Like flying discs

All the less prepared you are
When the throwing knives hurtle your way
You are struck down a dark passage of limitless question

When you meet the face in the water and it tells you
This is because of you, thanks to you
It has been done in honor of you

That is when you will know the true weight on your heart
Of loneliness, not for a night
But a desperate reach until your light flickers out

© 2019 Daniela


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This can understand
I survived 17 years of emotional
abuse with my ex that is a lesson.

And loneliness can be a cruel
mistress but the loving hearts
eventually heal slowly and go
on with life eventually.


And the hateful cruel hearts keep
Being cruel and let their past
become their future...

And carry a loneliness within because
they're alone forever from all those
that they hurt and pushed away out of their
lives with their selfishness.

Nicely penned thank
you for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This can understand
I survived 17 years of emotional
abuse with my ex that is a lesson.

And loneliness can be a cruel
mistress but the loving hearts
eventually heal slowly and go
on with life eventually.


And the hateful cruel hearts keep
Being cruel and let their past
become their future...

And carry a loneliness within because
they're alone forever from all those
that they hurt and pushed away out of their
lives with their selfishness.

Nicely penned thank
you for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

some will just continue to mistreat others....it will be a long eternity...and a long life before that for those who need help and will find no givers...just takers to match how they were treated.
well said, Daniela.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Daniela

4 Years Ago

Exactly! Thank you for your review (:

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Added on August 1, 2019
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Tags: Poem, poetry, loneliness, alone, sadness, depression, sad, anger

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Daniela
Daniela

San Antonio, TX



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