Dark wind

Dark wind

A Poem by Danny
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Inspired by the Japanese death poems, warriors and samurai.

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Once the sun shone upon my land;
land full of valleys and hills,
land full of hope.

Now, that hope is gone;
taken by mysterious dark wind,
wind full of anger and hate.

Oh great wind, I accept my death!
Let the cold wind take my soul;
to my sacred home.

© 2014 Danny


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IInd phrase`s full of insights. The last one has many diversions for "love" but still dispersing the shades in the sky. Nice imagery.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An angry read of abandoning oneself to fate…

I have an edit in line one, though: "Once the sun [shone] upon my land;"

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Danny

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! :)
MomzillaNC

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
An inspired and inspiring poem. Bravo, sir...:)................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Danny

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome....:).......

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Added on September 7, 2014
Last Updated on September 13, 2014
Tags: Japan, death poem, warrior, samurai

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Danny
Danny

Stolac, Bosnia and Herzegovina



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Hi, I'm Daniel. I'm 25 and I'm studying English language and literature at local university. I love reading. Recently I started writing poetry. That's all about me! :) more..

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