The Conversation collections Vol 1 {Sugary Nothingness}

she speaks in languages that often need deciphering...it is endless and exhausting...she dosnt know why she does it...why she feels the need to make everyone work so hard trudging through her plots and meanderings...why she begs to be interpreted on difficult levels that are so unnecessary. It is little more than a trick of light.. she conjures up these complications and distractions to take up the  empty space...a slight of hand she uses to fool the masses into thinking that she is this complex creature poised and seasoned...but in reality she is just plain Jane...simple and stupid....she takes up too much space so she must account for those wasted spaces that she spends on folly and distractions.. illusions spun around a simple paper cone like cotton candy all pink and fluffy only to dissolve into sugary nothingness the moment that it is placed upon the tongue...and all that is left is the sad little plain Jane paper cone and a gynormous bellyache from all that pink sugary nothing-ness........To Be Continued

 

She said "why must I beg you to love me?"

He said  .........nothing

"Why dosnt he want me?"

Reviews

[roarke]

Quite a stand alone introduction. Even from this, many layers of plot can be expected. The paper cone cotton candy analogy is perfect.
Then, although "to be continued" the end dialogue frames the "continued" self conversations a person with that kind of self esteem would say, establishing the archetype.
Good stuff.