Palace of woven freedom

Palace of woven freedom

A Poem by Dante

So you open the curtain and enter the palace
This a place that is not filled with malice
So show some glee, take a seat
But just take a load off your feet
I shall show you the way
To find you some happiness today
May it be an hour for a for the rest your stay
I am just glad you could see how i see
Look at me I will show you how free you can be

This palace of of cloth of points held high
Watch these two as they swing in the sky
This palace of the free just wait you will see
Things will be pleasant just u watch and it's what i decree
Now look to the ground to see the spew of the violent crimson light
Blazing forth into the night the spray growing increasing in might
But this is just the beginning of the show in this palace of the free
Don't stare at me continue to watch and you will see
Back into the sky, Observe with your unbelieving eye
If he should plummet the crowd shall surly cry
As he takes his step leaving his life on a thread
Look you can see his courage has not fled

But now to the Grand finale
just watch me I will show you a world most can not see
Look and join me in this palace of free
Join this family traveling in wonders
This life you can see there is no blunders
Feel the relief of distraught
But if not i would be sad but its just a thought
I love this style so carefree
But you really know its just me
I See the Glamor in the light
The applause it just feels right
So this choice is yours you must make it tonight
If it's a no we shall vanish into the night
If it's a yes we shall both vanish and you will see what it's like to be free

© 2010 Dante


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Added on July 9, 2010
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Dante
Dante

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