Frozen in my tracks with words that now lacks luster

Frozen in my tracks with words that now lacks luster

A Poem by Dante
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These words have been twisted

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Heart felt warmth is so far away,longing for it but never reaching it

sadly knowing I am just out of it's loving reach.

A hug the closest thing I could find but still so utterly far away,

I just hope but hope is dead there is no need for it.

I keep my head pointed down with hopes high just to have them crushed.

Right in front of me. Love is lost the meaning it's been blurred,this needs to be cleared

to prove that as generations go on that the word, the meaning and the force

behind this word are not lost. Look at the power this phrase once held.

It is becoming ugly and distorted and such a cold word.

Love let your meaning be renewed and your warmth brought back

So I watch as I think I get closer to the warmth I watch as it's pulled from my finger tips

I want you to take a look to find this word and it's true warmth = I love you

© 2010 Dante


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Hi Dante, I am new on this site. I have some of the same things going on in my life as well. It truly seems that those words, "I Love You" are easily thrown around and have little meaning now days. There are no true feelings behind them and when someone does mean them and their partner doesn't, it can cause such heartache and pain, that can last a lifetime.
I'm glad I stopped by to read your words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hi Dante, I am new on this site. I have some of the same things going on in my life as well. It truly seems that those words, "I Love You" are easily thrown around and have little meaning now days. There are no true feelings behind them and when someone does mean them and their partner doesn't, it can cause such heartache and pain, that can last a lifetime.
I'm glad I stopped by to read your words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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