Story Of A Girl

She was born in a town so small

with hardly anyone around

a smart girl who lived reality

and kept her feet flat on the ground

She didn't have the best upbringing

there was a lot of pain for her to endure

she was taught to hold her own

let her faith block out the impure

but eventually this girl would grow up

and she'd know what's going on

she'd grow her wings and fly away

and she'd go away, be long gone

This girls life passed by so fast

and soon she was all grown 

she fell in love, she fell out

in every relationship she'd known

Soon this girl would be on her own

She'd be by herself, this young girl

she'd set off on her path in life

to become only a small part of the world.

Author's Note

I wasn't really sure how to end this one, because at about the last part my creativity meter went "meh" on me lol. So, suggestions would be amazingly appreciated so I can work with it a little :)

Reviews

[jacobballenger]

like i said, probably shouldnt have written it..

[jacobballenger]

i like it. and i have a new poem, not sure if i shoulda posted it but oh well...

[Darian Justine]

I'll look.