Love Everlasting

Love Everlasting

A Poem by Darien Don

a whim


To love you

I have everything I could have hoped for

A dream, future, and life

You've taken my lifeless body and breathed in

Picked me up from the rocks

Waking me with a kiss, like Snow White

Now you propose to me lasting love

A life forever with you

We young kids reckless and naive

We'll walk together until old age

Until death

Until forever and ever

You are mine.

© 2011 Darien Don

Author's Note

Darien Don
Review please :) <3

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Your style is unique and completely different from so many I've read. On that note you find a way to make it work and that truly shows that you are a talent writer. You write with such emotion that the reader has no choice but to feel exactly what you do. Great write, keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Pretty good sister! I like how you keep progressing forward at the end..."until old age, until death, until forever and ever"

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 16, 2011
Last Updated on December 16, 2011


Darien Don
Darien Don

Rural, AK

I'm Darien Southall, but I'll Darien Moore by the end of the year. I'm marrying a wonderful man this December. I've changed a lot in the last couple years. My views. My lifestyle. It's all so dif.. more..