Love Everlasting

a whim

To love you

I have everything I could have hoped for

A dream, future, and life

You've taken my lifeless body and breathed in

Picked me up from the rocks

Waking me with a kiss, like Snow White

Now you propose to me lasting love

A life forever with you

We young kids reckless and naive

We'll walk together until old age

Until death

Until forever and ever

You are mine.

Author's Note

Review please :) <3

Reviews

[Brett Forsythe]

Your style is unique and completely different from so many I've read. On that note you find a way to make it work and that truly shows that you are a talent writer. You write with such emotion that the reader has no choice but to feel exactly what you do. Great write, keep it up.

[Jonathan Brooks]

Pretty good sister! I like how you keep progressing forward at the end..."until old age, until death, until forever and ever"