The Phantom of Five/Three.

The Phantom of Five/Three.

A Poem by Stormy Weather

She filled the whole car as she had once filled my chest.

The taste of her lips had gone cold and stale.

But just as she had left me alone behind the wheel that night,

She left my heart empty and aching for her to come home.

© 2013 Stormy Weather


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Impressive imagery,and the kind of poetry I like, words that create emotions based on real things, situations, pictures, not emotion pure as so much of the poetry you read.
So truth in things..great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Stormy Weather

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
This may be short, but it has a lot of impact and meaning behind these words

Posted 6 Years Ago


Stormy Weather

6 Years Ago

Thank you ^.^

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